Corrections To
The Books Of The Truth
By
The Man Who Saw God Face To Face
Raphael Okechukwu Nweze
Introduction
As the man who saw God face
to face read, I corrected and confirmed several written accounts of people who
visited heaven and hell.
Examples
Corrections were given to:
1.
Bad grammatical
statements.
Wrong: We said to the
Lord, "Lord we don't want to go to that place!”
Right: We said to the
Lord, "Lord, we don't want to go to that place!”
2.
Spelling errors.
Wrong: The angels leads us
into the hell region.
Right: The Angels led us into the hell region.
Wrong: I was hundreds of thousands of
pits.
Right: I saw hundreds of thousands of pits.
3.
Spelling errors
and missing punctuation.
Wrong: I said, “Alright
Lord, I want to go with the angels now.”
Right: I said, “All
right, Lord, I want to go with the angels now.”
4.
Wrong paragraph
settings.
Wrong: Jesus said, "I have something to show you in hell,"
"But Lord I don't want to be here. Lord, remember our first experience,
you already showed me many things", He said, "Yes, My child, but now different things I
will show you."
Right:
Jesus said, "I have
something to show you in hell".
"But Lord, I don't want to be here. Lord, remember our first
experience, you already showed me many things."
He said, "Yes, My child,
but now different things I will show you."
5.
Wrong names.
Wrong: Holy Ghost.
Right: Holy Spirit.
Wrong: Luis.
Right: Louis.
6.
Missing explanations. Additions were made, to
ensure right expressions and clear understanding.
Wrong: Such torments that
a human being could never express them.
Right: Such torments that
a human being can never express them (in words).
7.
Wrong use of words.
Wrong: The only people
there where those who knew Jesus and the Word of God.
Right: The only people
there were those who knew Jesus and the word of God, but failed to
repent.
8.
Wrong agreement.
Wrong: We could see that
all the people there had approximately six different type
of torments.
Right: We could see that
all the people there had approximately six different types of
torments.
9.
Incomplete statements.
Wrong: The consuming fire
that was thousands and thousands times hotter than we know.
Right: The consuming fire
that was thousands and thousands times hotter than what (the hotness) we know
here on earth.
10.
Unnecessary abbreviations.
Wrong: Let’s…
Right: Let us…
11.
Wrong punctuations.
Wrong: Soon I
noticed a very rotten smell;
Right: Soon, I noticed a
very rotten smell;
12.
Wrong references.
Wrong: Open or closed,
I still saw everything.
Right: With my eyes open
or closed, I still saw everything.
13.
Lack of
capitalizations.
Wrong: they are
utterly consumed with terrors.
Right: They are utterly
being consumed with terrors.
14.
Missing clues
(subtitles).
Read
the two texts below and see a great difference, especially by the addition of
clues (subtitles), which gives better organization and clear understanding.
Wrong:
Angelica, an Ecuadorian girl, shares the revelation
she received from God of Heaven and Hell after a time of Prayer and Fasting.
At
this time, I invite my loyal friend, the Holy Spirit. May He be the One who
speaks through me and may it be Him who testifies about the experience He gave
me.
To be honest with you, I don’t want to speak about it.
Do you want to know why I don’t want to speak about it? The reason is because
within the church is where you find the most unbelief. It is within the church
where you find the most hypocrites. It is within the church where these things
exist.
I don’t want to speak about it, but I have to obey
God. They are very serious revelations, so if you don’t understand them, ask
God for understanding. I have come here to fulfill God’s will and I ask for
forgiveness if I offend you or if I have offended you in the past. I love you
all with the love of Jesus Christ.
Right:
Introduction
Angelica, an Ecuadorian girl, shares the revelation
she received from God of Heaven and Hell after a time of Prayer and Fasting.
For
Confirmations
At this time, I invite my loyal friend, the Holy Spirit.
May He be the One who speaks through me and may it be Him who testifies about
the experience He gave me.
Hypocrisy
In The Churches
To be honest with you, I don’t want to speak about it.
Do you want to know why I don’t want to speak about it? The reason is because
within the church is where you find the most unbelief. It is within the church
where you find the most hypocrites. It is within the church where these things
exist.
How
To Very The Messages
I don’t want to speak about it, but I have to obey
God. They are very serious revelations, so if you don’t understand them, ask
God for understanding. I have come here to fulfill God’s will and I ask for
forgiveness if I offend you or if I have offended you in the past. I love you
all with the love of Jesus Christ.
15.
Typographical
errors.
Wrong: I saw was
an enormous wall.
Right: I saw an enormous
wall.
16.
Improper arrangement.
Wrong: The Bible tells
us, "The wages of sin is death," and that "the soul that sins
will die." (Romans 6:23) (Ezekiel 18:20)
Right: The Bible tells
us, "The wages of sin is death," (Romans 6:23)
and that "the soul that sins will die." (Ezekiel 18:20)
17.
Missing prepositions.
Wrong: Dear friends that
are listening these words right now.
Right: Dear friends that
are listening to these words right now.
Wrong: “It hurts me
that the love on many on the earth is now growing cold.
Right: “It hurts me
that the love of many on the earth is now growing cold. Many
18.
Missing punctuations.
Wrong: Today you
have life
Right: Today, you have
life.
19.
Wrong statement
of time.
Wrong: My mother and others have told me that at three
in the morning I took a deep breath and then I completely stopper breathing.
Right: My mother and others have told me that at 3:00am in the morning, I took a deep breath, and then I
completely stopped breathing.
20.
Wrong exclamations.
Wrong: Amen?
Right: Amen!
21.
Wrong choice of preposition.
Wrong: He said: “When you return to the earth tell
people not to fight of cause division.”
Right: He said: “When you return to the earth,
tell people not to fight or cause division.”
22.
Wrong choice of word.
Wrong: On the contrary,
start giving good fruit.
Right: On the contrary,
start bearing good fruits.
23.
Wrong capitalization of subtitles.
Wrong: A testimony from
a man
Right: A Testimony From A Man
24.
Wrong expressions.
Wrong: The Holy Spirit will
be filled with new oil in every vase.
Right: The Holy Spirit
will fill every vase with new oil.
25.
Wrong adjective.
Wrong: No murder
can come in the Kingdom of Heaven.
Right: No murderer can
come into the Kingdom of Heaven.
26.
Improper titles.
Wrong: Repent
and Messiah Coming Soon/Rapture!
Right:
Rapture!
Repent, For The
Messiah Is Coming Soon
27.
Imprecise reference.
Wrong: God
will put wealth in His people hands to help the needy.
Right: God
will put wealth in the hands of His people, to help the needy.
28.
Bad method of enumeration.
Wrong: The Bible states three immutable things about God: 1st God is
Spirit, 2nd God is invisible and 3rd God is immortal.
Right: The Bible states three immutable things about God: first, God is
Spirit; second, God is invisible; and third, God is immortal.
29.
Wrong description.
Wrong: As various,
as complete, and as extremely violent as they (the hellish sufferings) are,
they are also continual (from time to time, not always).
Right: As
various, as complete, and as extremely violent as they (the hellish sufferings)
are, they are also continuous (unbroken, without end).
30.
Wrong expression
of intention.
Wrong: Lord, I've enjoyed this time of prayer, but as
I walk out into the world, lead me not into temptation.
Right: Lord, I have enjoyed this time of prayer, but as I
walk out into the world, do not allow me to fall into temptation.
31.
Unnecessary wordings.
Wrong: We
continued traveling at a great rate of speed.
Right: We
continued traveling at a great speed.
32.
Wrong statement of facts and realities
Wrong:
The
day of worship is Sunday, the Firstday.
Right:
The
true day of worship is the Seventhday, the Sabbath Day.
God said, “Six days you shall labor and do all
your work, but the seventh day is the Sabbath of the Lord your God.” Exodus
20:9-10
And Jesus is the Lord of Sabbath. Luke 6:5
"Remember the Sabbath day, to keep it
holy. 9 Six days you shall labor and do all your work, 10 but the seventh day
is the Sabbath of the Lord your God. In it you shall do no work: you, nor your son, nor your daughter, nor your male servant, nor your
female servant, nor your cattle, nor your stranger who is within your
gates. 11 For in six days the Lord made the heavens and the earth, the sea, and
all that is in them, and rested the seventh day. Therefore the Lord blessed the
Sabbath day and hallowed it.” Exodus 20:8-11
33.
Wrong indentations.
Wrong:
Maxima: When my daughter got home, we
were in the kitchen. When Angelica saw the servant of the Lord, she said,
"May the Lord bless you." The man of God responded,
"God bless you. Are you ready? For today is the
day that the Lord will take you, at 4 PM."
She just stood there, astonished that the Lord had granted her request.
Angelica: When I heard this I said, "Amen...but
I don't want to die, I can't die! No, Lord, I'm afraid, very much afraid,
terrified!" The servant of the Lord said, “Let's pray that your
fear will leave now in the name of our Lord." I said, "Amen"
and we prayed. Soon I felt all fear leave me, and an indescribable joy
came, thinking that death was the best thing that could happen to me! I
started to smile and laugh while everyone was looking at me. They could
all see that I went from being dismal to joyful. I was smiling, jumping
and singing.
Right:
Maxima: When my daughter got home, we
were in the kitchen. When Angelica saw the servant of the Lord, she said,
"May the Lord bless you." The man of God responded,
"God bless you. Are you ready? For today is the
day that the Lord will take you, at 4 PM."
She just stood there, astonished that the Lord had granted her request.
Angelica: When I heard this I said, "Amen...but
I don't want to die, I can't die! No, Lord, I'm afraid, very much afraid,
terrified!" The servant of the Lord said, “Let's pray that your
fear will leave now in the name of our Lord." I said, "Amen"
and we prayed. Soon I felt all fear leave me, and an indescribable joy
came, thinking that death was the best thing that could happen to me! I
started to smile and laugh while everyone was looking at me. They could
all see that I went from being dismal to joyful. I was smiling, jumping
and singing.
34.
Incomplete statements.
Wrong: “The sight was so horrifying,
we didn't want to see what was shown to us.”
Right: “The sight was so horrifying that we didn't
want to see what was shown to us.”
Other Mistakes And Errors
1.
Generally, the
writings lacked introduction.
2.
Some of the
authors were grouping so many events under the same heading or subtitle.
3.
Many failed to
explain in details the messages given to them.
For example:
Jesus said without truth, righteousness and holiness
none shall enter the kingdom.
They failed to explain the
meaning of truth, righteousness and holiness.
Also, they failed to give
everyday examples with real life situations and conducts.
4.
Etc.